Teacher feedback: - some nice shots and camera angles etc.. - some good attention to make up e.g. fake blood etc.. - nice use of music to add drama - font and colour of font on titles make it look a bit more like a teen comedy than a horror / thriller film - the green top on Jasmine and the green fields make it all look a bit jolly and happy so maybe you could work on desaturating the colour a little or colour correcting the shots to make it more muted and serious? - some of the shots of the blood dripping in the shower area are VERY long and could do with being broken down a bit, even if that mean filming some newer close ups this week - could maybe do with a stronger ending shot that is more dramatic? -- could currently achieve 41 / 60 (B/C) but could get more if the above points are tackled
Teacher feedback:
ReplyDelete- some nice shots and camera angles etc..
- some good attention to make up e.g. fake blood etc..
- nice use of music to add drama
- font and colour of font on titles make it look a bit more like a teen comedy than a horror / thriller film
- the green top on Jasmine and the green fields make it all look a bit jolly and happy so maybe you could work on desaturating the colour a little or colour correcting the shots to make it more muted and serious?
- some of the shots of the blood dripping in the shower area are VERY long and could do with being broken down a bit, even if that mean filming some newer close ups this week
- could maybe do with a stronger ending shot that is more dramatic?
-- could currently achieve 41 / 60 (B/C) but could get more if the above points are tackled